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Whoops, Can't swim by Evermore-warrior Whoops, Can't swim by Evermore-warrior

An rp with :iconspottedfire550: along with :iconlyss504813: ^^
This was one of the more interesting ones I've had at the Golden Butterfly, tis fun :3

The icy water sent a bolt of shock running through the young she-cats body. The wretched sound of the cracking ice still echoed in her mind as she submerged into the frigid black water. There was little she could do, to be honest, she had always been a poor swimmer, even if she was forced into this kind of a situation. However, once the fall ended, everything seemed...slow. Aza allowed herself to open her icy eyes to peer around the watery surroundings, only for a quick moment.
'Red..' Her own thoughts began racing. 'Blood..' Aza hissed in her mind. Slowly, she was dragged away from her thoughts as the powerful current of the water began to rearrange the young felines positioning. Her irises once again gazed upon the waters' surface, as the rays of light rained down onto the she-cats dark pelt. Aza's eyes stuck to the surface of the water, as she slowly delved deeper into the unforgiving black water. Bubbled escaped her mouth, frantically making way for the surface as if they mocked the drowning she-cat. ' I'm not dying here!' Her thoughts roared, ears ringing. Paws lashing she whirled herself in the water, forcing more bubbles to escape her mouth out of pure adrenaline. The she-cats paws lashed through the frigid liquid her heart set on escape and escape alone. With a final effort she burst from the surface, paws frantically bashing the water, sending the displaced droplets scattering all around her. But the fights not over..
Her gaze fell on the tall icy walls that surrounded her. When the she-cat had fallen through the ice, there had been a massive hollow snow mound that followed along the waters edge, and along with deeper parts of the lake. Whipping her head from side to side, pondering her next moved, she was jolted away from her thoughts, as her frantic paws that had fought to keep her above the water, forced small waves of water to overlap her head. The young apprentices ears pounded, and rang, horribly.. head throbbing, chest burning..
Something tore through the silence, a voice. Right away she knew who it was. A mass, formed at the edge of the hole, where Aza had fallen. A familiar, ginger tom cat. 'Ross!' she thought in delight, however was uncomfortably aware, her struggles were not over yet. Ross positioned himself on the edge, letting his tail dangle down into the freezing water. He ordered her to grab hold. With little hesitation the young feline sunk her teeth into his tail, still intent on escaping alive. Her heart sank as she noticed her companion scraping his claws against the icy edge, as if he was about to fall in himself. She knew if that happened, there would be no chance of escape.
Another voice sounded, unfamiliar, yet comforting.. Aza began to heave herself up, with the help of her companion Ross, and another Mysterious feline. Claws scraping the ice, she was overtaken by the light of the sun, as the scent of Earth Tribe flooded her nostrils..

Derp, the end.

Ross (c):iconspottedfire550:
"mystery cat" (c):iconlyss504813:
Aza (c) moi
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TimberWolf101 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist
this is cool! can you draw my cat OC Emberheart? you can find a lot of art of her in my gallery.

it's alright if you don't want to or can't, i'm just wondering what she would look like in your style ;P
DD2950 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Awesome.
Dovesplash Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so beautiful <3
Evermore-warrior Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
thanks c:
Snowwire Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Artist
Really lovely, even if it's just a picture it has a lot of motion in it. :)
Nice use of colours and great expression! :D <3
Evermore-warrior Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
Thanks :D
Khloe123 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student Artist
lol...<3 love itt!
spottedfire550 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
RP? x3
Evermore-warrior Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
Arg, sorry >.<
I wasn't online very much today o3o
We still need to finish that rp XD
spottedfire550 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im on now? xD
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